Wow! Awesome!
I'm glad you put this up. You and Ash did a good job with this. I think you should post the words though too.
The music does hold it all together very well but the intro was very slow getting into the song. I really liked the ending. Overall, a very well written song with very good words. It was a little hard to hear some of the words over the music and it sounds like you both had a few trouble spots while recording.
You really sound into it and you show that you both mean what you're saying. I'm guessing you came up with all the stuff that you said and Ash came up with hers? There was rather a big difference in swearing and stuff. But knowing you, it fits very well.
Good job.