Hmmm...
I don't know what Krayon's problem is but I personally think that this piece is great! I like the way you portrayed the wind. The words "flying" and "wind" don't have to mean fast and soaring. With this piece I can imagine gently flying in the clouds in peace. Flying to me is more relaxing and beautiful than the extravagant soaring that Krayon wants. I think you did a wonderful job with it. It's beautiful!