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Great song

I love how you have the harmony on the chorus and how you have the verses kinda fading in and out of eachother. How are you going to have 4-6 different vocalists on this though?
It'd be even better if it was longer. I hope you're planning on adding a bunch more to it.

Wow! Awesome!

I'm glad you put this up. You and Ash did a good job with this. I think you should post the words though too.
The music does hold it all together very well but the intro was very slow getting into the song. I really liked the ending. Overall, a very well written song with very good words. It was a little hard to hear some of the words over the music and it sounds like you both had a few trouble spots while recording.
You really sound into it and you show that you both mean what you're saying. I'm guessing you came up with all the stuff that you said and Ash came up with hers? There was rather a big difference in swearing and stuff. But knowing you, it fits very well.
Good job.

Sounds cool.

Nice typo in your comment babe. ^_^
The little high pitched part is kinda weird and I think it may have annoyed my roommates but they can just deal. lol

You're right

It did totally blow my mind hon. Good job. It's amazing!

Great!

Why do you have so much silence on the end of it?

Wow...

I read the other reviews and it really made me think while listening to the song. I think you did a really good job of capturing the thought of not knowing what is going to happen and the possibility of not coming home.
That better not ever happen to you. Not even in the slightest. Be safe out there.
And I do think you should redo the song but it's also very good as it is. It's got so much emotion in it that you did really well. I love it.

Love it

This song randomly came on my mp3 player a few days ago and I instantly loved it! The last person is right that the vocals do need more strength but other than that, I like it alot.
-DF-

Wow

I really like it! Especially all of the complicated sounding fast rhythms. I think I need to hear you do the cadence sometime. ;)
-DF-

Awesome

I really like this one! It's one of my new favorites!

Better

I think it's better than before. I like what you've done with both of you singing but you could change so he's doing more real harmony instead of just matching you. But overall, it's better than the first one. Keep it up, Teej. You're amazing and you know I love all of your work. This is definitely one of my favorites.
-DF-

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